Vincent Van Gogh was born March 30, 1853. Vincent loved art from a very young age, lthough he did not start painting until his late twenties. He worked at a art museum through his life but never shared his art.
Vincent Van Gogh had trouble with woman. He fell in love but when he proposed she refused. After being turned down he chased her back to her homeland. Later on in life, he fell in love again but she also refused. That time he cut off one of his ears.
With the help of his brother, he was able to get his paintings on the market. Vincent van Gogh didn't sell any paints until right before his death. He became suicidal and shot himself. He didn't kill himself but he did bleed to death from the wound.
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ReplyDeleteVincent - you do want to use his name often as you write, but not to begin two sentences back to back. Add some flavor. First five sentences start with Vincent (or he).
ReplyDeleteThe other thing, put a space between paragraphs to make it easier to follow.
Woman or women? The second paragraph could be worded to be more interesting, scandalist even, but you seem to just be reporting facts.
Go to your brother's blog and comment on his post about VanGogh.